Attempt at drawing the Tornado

gah...I suck SO hard at drawing biplanes...and cars...and boats...ANY kind of vehicle! I took technical drawing and I know the basics of perspective and proportion, not to mention I had 2 actual physical biplanes in front of me for drawing models...but I just SUCK T_T I mean, that thing up there looks like a plane, but it's so...technical, it doesn't look dynamic or real at all, it's just like a schematic of a plane. Well I'm going to make another one of these for the next commission so it looks better when I MAKE one at least.